At these moments
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America
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has carried on
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not simply because of the skill or vision of those in high office
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but
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because
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We the People
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have remained
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faithful to the ideals of our forbearers*, and true to our founding
documents
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a
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x b cause: reason
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Actor
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Process: material
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Cause: reason
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Carrier
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Process: relational
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Adjunct
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Subject
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Finite/Predicator
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Adjunct
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Subject
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Finite/Predicator
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Complement
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Theme: marked
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Rheme
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Theme
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Rheme
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Reasoning:
The 'but' relates to 'not simply' and anticipates a second prepositional phrase related by paratactic extension in a phrase complex realising a circumstance of Cause: reason.* However, the writer has instead opted for an enhancing dependent clause of Cause: reason, thereby creating a logical inconsistency.
The hypotactic relation between the clauses can be made more apparent by removing the preceding circumstance of Cause: reason (which also removes the need for 'but'):
The hypotactic relation between the clauses can be made more apparent by removing the preceding circumstance of Cause: reason (which also removes the need for 'but'):
At these moments
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America
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has carried on
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because
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We the People
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have remained
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faithful to the ideals of our forbearers, and true to our founding documents
|
a
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x b cause: reason
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Location
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Actor
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Process: material
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Carrier
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Process: relational
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Attribute
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Adjunct
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Subject
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Finite/Predicator
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Subject
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Finite/Predicator
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Complement
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Theme: marked
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Rheme
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Theme
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Rheme
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* An extending paratactic prepositional phrase complex such as:
not simply because of the skill or vision of those in high office,
but because of the fact that We the People have
remained faithful to the ideals of our forbearers, and true to our founding
documents
not simply
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because of
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the skill or vision [of those in high office]
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but
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because of
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the fact [[that We the People have remained faithful to the ideals of
our forbearers, and true to our founding documents]]
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1
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+ 2
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Range
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Process
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Range
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∞
* forbear
verb: politely or patiently restrain an impulse to do something; refrain.
"he modestly forbears to include his own work"
synonyms: refrain, abstain, desist, keep, restrain oneself, stop oneself, hold back,withhold
The theory accounts for an instance like this the same way it accounts for instances like he done real good.
On the mismatch between potential and instance, see here.
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